What to do when a very long noun form is the subject of the sentence – The Manila Times

What to do when a very long noun form is the subject of the sentence

The Manila Times

That sentence-it’s from an actual news release run by a Metro Manila broadsheet (only the company name is disguised)-almost always stumped participants of my business writing seminar many years ago when I asked them to rewrite it for clarity.

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